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Saying Goodbye

Quietly she walks holding back a flood of tears they all sense her pain empty stares behind their eyes as she lay her child to rest ~by Barbara Writes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/17/2008 10:41:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words on this one. This has to be one of the most tragic things any parent can face. You captured the devastation in this poem. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen
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