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She yelled at the drawer that she'd just taken out as something had fell out at the back, “ Get in! Get in!” as she struggled and pushed, but it ignored her verbal attack. “ Come on! Come on!” he kept turning the key, the ignition fought hard to resist, and the engine just murmured in spite just as he thumped the dash, for his train he had missed. “ Today, Today!” She yelled out at the kettle which seemed in no rush to make tea, so she hit it three times with the back of a spoon which would add extra time on, you'll see. Inanimate objects can't hear what we say, they don't playfully set out to tease, but just in case they are all sentient beings why don't you just try saying “Please” ?

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Date: 6/25/2018 12:42:00 AM
LOL...a delightful poem, Viv!
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Date: 6/22/2018 9:05:00 AM
Sounds like you have witnessed the object abuse and the impatience of mankind many times over. So, there are a few of us who will relax and take it as it comes.....but not many of us in this culture. You are quite the wit, sir!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/24/2018 1:05:00 AM
Thanks, Duke, I rarely shout at things, but my good lady has developed it into an art form.
Date: 6/21/2018 8:03:00 PM
haha , so WITTY, Viv. I love this, and thanks so much for my win. I sure enjoy your contests.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/24/2018 1:05:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, look forward to your input as always. Viv x
Date: 6/21/2018 2:24:00 PM
At least they were not talking to themselves....or were they?
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/24/2018 1:06:00 AM
Hmm.. I shall keep the kettle and the toaster in seperate rooms from now on, to stop them conspiring x
Date: 6/21/2018 12:15:00 PM
Adorable, Viv! I really had fun reading and I'm sorry to say, relating to it xxoo
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Date: 6/24/2018 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Mike, now go easy on your washing machine in future, OK? Regards, Viv
Date: 6/21/2018 10:05:00 AM
Very entertaining, Viv. Love the humor!
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Date: 6/21/2018 8:50:00 AM
ha ha ha ever the humourist Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:17:00 AM
Viv.. you're a great writer who can tell such interesting and compelling stories.. here you demonstrate with a magnificent last line that makes the whole story!!
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Date: 6/21/2018 5:17:00 AM
Yes... Viv just say please lol
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Date: 6/21/2018 1:12:00 AM
Haha,I'll try that next time with a bit of blue at the end.
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