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Say Something

Shards of ice Stuck in throat Burning sideways Bitter char Need to speak Nothing rises

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Tom Woody

Date: 10/2/2023 3:15:00 PM

"Say something I'm giving up on you..." profound

Tom Woody
Date: 10/2/2023 3:15:00 PM

Ps always loved the name Raven

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/23/2023 3:30:00 PM

This is such a profound, powerful verse. Brilliant choice of dramatic words. Real impact on the reader especially the last line. Great writing. Thank you for sharing. :)

Raven Boerger
Date: 9/24/2023 6:58:00 AM

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and encouragement!

Fading Star Silence

Date: 9/19/2023 5:28:00 PM

Wow..the power and brilliance of this piece, said in just a few words, so profound and deep! I am in awe of your amazing work of art, divine poet!

Raven Boerger
Date: 9/19/2023 6:35:00 PM

Your kindness means the world, thank you for your comment!