Savor

You savor it...every last drop is bursting with intense flavor... Your mouth is consumed with delight... you are torn because you need more... how will you get more? Life is not the same with this craving... You stagger along... seeking...wanting... for more...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 10:38:00 AM

Meg, well done. LINDA

Samiha Zubair

Date: 11/24/2015 11:34:00 AM

Human nature. Never satisfied for what we have. A thoughtful write

Meg Anderson
Date: 11/24/2015 11:58:00 AM

Samiha, Thank you. I was inspired by my love for smoothies.

David Meade

Date: 11/23/2015 2:11:00 PM

Absolutely! We need more of your words -- like sweet honey your words taste in my mouth . . . to your lover -- the sweetness of you! I can taste the apple, cinnamon, banana smoothie . . . Yummy!

Meg Anderson
Date: 11/23/2015 3:07:00 PM

Awe...well the words are coming...