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Saving Daylight

I save the daylight When I'm here with you In hopes it lasts, the whole night through I will not sleep, 'till the mornings due Spending the night's daylight with you

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/7/2015 7:37:00 PM

Jerry, There is sometimes exceptional eloquence in simplicity. This poem beautifully demonstrates that truism. Wonderful!

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 3/8/2015 7:29:00 AM

thanks Paul,sometimes less is more---even in poetry.

Sharon Gulley

Date: 2/15/2015 6:46:00 PM

This is a sweet and lovely take on the Saving Daylight contest. This should win first place....Sharon G. " Good Luck in the contest." Love this write.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 3/8/2015 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Sharon

Deb Wilson

Date: 2/7/2015 6:34:00 AM

How very sweet ! Hugs, Deb

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 3/8/2015 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Deb, I'm glad you like it.