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Saved By a Wizard

It was beginning to get dusk, the crimson red moon was out. Eerie sounds, you could hear while we were out and about. Deep in the mist,  Eyes glowed of red. We heard a dark voice,  This is what it said, "You're both mine tonight." I screamed, you grabbed me tight both were full of fright. He chased us with a butcher knife. His face pale and white. Screaming out of his lungs,  We ran far out of sight. We couldn't hide from him He soon found us again  deep, into the woods, shaking, so deep within He was angry he missed, Then came after me instead. He had just missed my head with the blade, was pissed. I felt his anger, as his hand slashed his blade My skin was missed,  as he slashed and swayed. He swung to the left, once to the right  Moved us towards, an old gravesight. There we heard the chanting of a witch. Ravens and crows swarming above, then that rotten witch, screamed, with a high pitch, and the monster, gave a big shove. Suddenly, we stood upon a hill, where the witch was suddenly still. There stood a pot, burning upon a fire, upon it hung a human wire. Bodies swung upside down,  flesh began to hit the ground. She slowly raised them into the pot. She had no extra room for us to hang. All of a sudden, there was a loud bang, Someone was standing in that spot. A wizard stood, raising us in the air, soon we both disappeared. She couldn't find us at all. At the goblins, she did hiss, all they did, was throw a kiss  She got angry and got her crystal ball. In the crystal ball, she could not see, so she threw it hysterically. Wizard appeared just in time, saving us both, from this line. Crystal ball dropped into our hands  the wizard laughed out loud. Around the witch, was a huge crowd. The wizard began to chant, which he then started to rant. "Rain on her," he yelled, rain had fell. "Tell me where are they,"she screamed,  "I've looked far, wide, and in between." "so me, you better tell." The rain was too hot, melted her away, no way, would the goblins stay, The wizard then picked up the whiskey,  and took a shot. by Melanie Palmer       Mike Damavoletes 10/22/14 Author Notes I enjoyed co-writing this poem with Melanie Palmer would like to thank her for taking her time to put this together.

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Date: 11/6/2014 12:06:00 PM
- A little late ..... But, I will congratulate you with a 2nd place Michael and Melanie - a great winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:17:00 AM
Wonderful Halloween write you two! awesome job!
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Date: 11/4/2014 7:15:00 PM
Congrats Mike and Melanie on this fabulous collaboration and win
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Date: 11/4/2014 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this outstanding poem.
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Date: 11/4/2014 1:23:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Melanie and Mike and I love the humour at the end:-) Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2014 1:15:00 PM
Melanie and Mike, you have great imagination throughout this poem. Congratulations on your second place!
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:17:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Michael - I choose your first very well written "co-poem" :) - I like it a lot!! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:55:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita
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Michael Damavoletes
Date: 10/25/2014 8:03:00 PM
Ty so much
Date: 10/23/2014 6:13:00 PM
I'm awed and exhausted, at the same time, with this poem...well done!
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Michael Damavoletes
Date: 10/23/2014 6:18:00 PM
Ty so much

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