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Saved Betrayal

In the moment of our lives
We cherish the philosophy of take and give
No more secret i won't missed
But soon the twilight get dismissed

In the moment of mellow tune
In the gloom of we consumed
Be a start of an exchange
Be a space in our range

The sinner of past, poke the ignorance of mind
When it's too busy in a wander of blind
The existence of a courtesy be the reason to remain
Though the flame burns its jealousy in pain

In the innocent of words, you say
Like I'm an idiotic who would pleasure to say "okay"
At first lets pretend that I am cool
At last I'm bleeding like a fool

You may conceal the rest of your sin
And I would pretend to live like it seems
I prefer myself to be deaf 
Rather than caught you in the stray of a gaps

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:28:00 AM
    Beautiful write Yanny! I love how you've brought out the turn from cool to fool - it illustrates well the bad side of betrayal. Well written!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/10/2012 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vicky :), thanks for stopping by too :) - Hug, Yanny