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Save Your Lousy Self

Save Your Lousy Self Save your pity for a fool that is not witty save your sorrow for a jerk with no tomorrow Save your scorn for your future unborn save your smartass for another dumbass Save your lies for your coming black eyes save your taste for your own stupid waste Save your frown for another silly clown save your next scam for your next big ham Save your mistakes for your jump in the lake save your life for terrible and massive strife! Save your love for next disease you can't get rid of save your mess for your next boatload of stress Save your speech for your next loud screech save your help for your next born welp Save your cries for your next false guise save your stand for your next super lousy band Save your gasps for your next futile grasps save your retreat for your next huge defeat Save your fall for your next crash into the wall save your pain for your next car wreck in the rain! An exercise in "saving" for frugal people that are lousy scoundrels!! I wrote this with a fool I know from my wild young days in mind... A little slam for fun.....

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Date: 5/29/2014 10:55:00 PM
NOw this is MY kind of slam. GREAT job with this one!!!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/30/2014 7:29:00 AM
I thank you much my friend. I had fun writing it..
Date: 5/29/2014 9:23:00 PM
VERY CREATIVE ROBERT AND VERY FUNNY! Best, Robert
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/30/2014 7:29:00 AM
Thank you my friend....Was a joy to write too

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