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save my soul from death caused by you

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save my soul from death caused by you

i can feel you 
all around me
safety is leaveing
my heart is bleeding
cant you see me
crying black tears
cant you hear me
screaming over here
never denying suicide
thougts entering my sad head
cant you try and 
catch me 
my life is falling
smashing to the ground

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  1. Date: 5/14/2010 5:25:00 PM
    nice expressions

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 3:33:00 PM
    strong write