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Save Me From You

Torn in the chest I'm bleeding for you Why don't you save me? Save me from you? Your cunnings ways have swept me off my feet You tortured me.. I'm starting to drowned In my own blood, That's where you left me. Metallic and empty Bright red and runny You don't care if I hurt Or bleed out my chest You're done with me You're on to the next With a knife in your hand you're ready to strike The next innocent soul that comes in your life It sickens me that this brings you delight But you don't care, To you its just another life I wonder if you know what you do? If you really meant to rip me in two? Is it still to late to save me from you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 2:38:00 PM
Great intensity, I've felt that pain and confusion (and unfortunately enabled it once or twice too)...oh, and it's never too late, just a matter of how and when. Keep up the great writing.
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Logan Holliday
Date: 4/18/2015 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, I really appreciate all the feed back and the comments!
Date: 3/25/2015 10:46:00 AM
I like this poem sad but full of emotion. Sarah.
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Logan Holliday
Date: 3/26/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thank you

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