Savanna Sunset

The air quivers Scorching Savanna sunset Lions seek their prey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2013 8:38:00 AM

this one has great imagery.

Rollo West
Date: 1/25/2013 10:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea. Rollo

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/11/2013 6:57:00 PM

love to read haiku, I don't think I write them so well,,, 5,7, 5 ;}

Rollo West
Date: 1/12/2013 9:53:00 PM

Hi Debbie, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/9/2013 10:50:00 AM

This is an outstanding write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and dynamic poem this afternoon! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/9/2013 10:54:00 AM

Hello my friend, thank you for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo