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Savage Angel

Old feathers ancient eyes new lips romantic face handsome heart, your dry sorrow his healing palms, large love kisses of cream rose pocket deep touch passionate pull, He comes for your heart... a soul plucker hunts light stalks beauty cries caress blood beast prays mutely, song stays weaponized wisdom sensitive wrong God groans - J.A.B.

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 5/25/2015 8:13:00 PM

Great piece, Justin. The honest emotion is deeply expressed in this amazing piece. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/5/2017 12:32:00 PM

Hunger is always honest in the heart...your respectful comment is appreciated Jiril...J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/25/2014 8:34:00 AM

The pull of opposites is a powerful force. No wonder angels fall.

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/1/2014 6:45:00 PM

Life and spirit are always pursuing compatibility...Angels do not fall or surrender, they battle to love. Thanks for studying this poem my friend. J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/12/2014 12:02:00 AM

No wonder God groans,this seems to be a naughty angel who likes to play the alluring and enticing role.Somehow I can see this angel as a human trapped in a dilhema between right and wrong,heart and soul.Pls God,do not groan ,this ancient angel.is only human. There.is so mucg for the reader to chew on between.the lines.I love it Justin.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/13/2014 1:26:00 AM

Chew with conscience caring for passion true, bite softly on heart shedding lust and rue. Your soul feels the love struggle Charma, I'm awed by your sight! J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2014 9:38:00 AM

Nicely done Justin, I feel deep emotions at large. Two different vibes, from this poem. A soulful melody lost, for the time being. Everything wrong, yet so right. The beauty of the night, brings more to light in this poem. I like the blood beast feeling running free, throughout. Awesomely done, Always..Linda

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2014 8:23:00 PM

This Angel, a pariah in lust, yearning to elevate soul through forbidden touch, inexplicable trust, at odds with God's instructions. Craving to seize love, to heal without permission. A rebel, free yet hungry. You understand the struggle. Your intuition is sweet and sharp my lovely Linda...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/30/2014 12:56:00 AM

Justin, well done in the theme of the seductress... Enjoyed... Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2014 8:14:00 PM

An Angel that seduces to survive, making soul gold from feasting on passion Verlena...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/29/2014 6:39:00 AM

Each aspect of one completes the other. As watchful and true as God is, would He rather watch or intervene? He seems to be interwoven in this bond... a poem of new and ancient magnificence fused together. Wild write, Justin. Always,Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/29/2014 3:05:00 PM

Yes Laura, yes! This is a wild write indeed, I'm thrilled that you see the staples of sensuous and spiritual behavior that seems to conflict with righteousness. Your question about God's stance is powerful. I just love how you read and feel my work Laura...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/28/2014 8:04:00 AM

each line makes me think, as you interweave of active verbs and active nouns..it delivers a double meaning impact to the reader.. :) and the ending is magnanimously perfect.. :)!! i like how you choose the word groan than any other..as groan for is a word in between of love and longing.. :)!!!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/28/2014 1:00:00 PM

You are somethin sweet Olive, your technical rundown of my piece is hot and insightful. Yeah, groan has heavy import. Thanks Olive...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/27/2014 3:43:00 AM

Beautiful, Justin. The concept of the hunted and the prey is beautiful....I love the fierceness of such a love....a love that doesn't give up...a love that is sure of conquering. It is a beautiful song you have sung today...

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/27/2014 4:57:00 PM

Sung from the wings of savage angel's needs, a paramount covet for her passion' inlet love Eileen...J.A.B.