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                                aImagination run wild..Sara
I sauntered freely as a child around the mountain ridge. On Falcon's wings I flew the mile across the placid lake to wooden bridge, where fir laden path skirted water; and powdered snow the ground did alter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 5:53:00 PM
Yes Sara, does it for me.. (great read today)
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:23:00 AM
Awesome imager Sara, just love the visuals.. God bless Wilma
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Date: 9/18/2011 2:35:00 AM
On Falcon's wings I flew the mile~ a very beautiful image,,, freely is the key.. Thank you for sharing,, God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:14:00 AM
sara, if this is for john's contest, wow, you did marvelous with this one!Were you supposed to call it verse?
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Date: 9/17/2011 11:00:00 PM
This is really lovely Sara, I love it and thanks for you ever comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:37:00 PM
A lovely poem, Sara. Sweet reminiscings of those days of innocence when the whole world was ours..God bless. Love, Annalise
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:26:00 PM
Very good write Sara! I love those descriptions and details you have in each line!! These produced great visualizations and wonderful imagery of a special time in your life! Great work!!
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:09:00 PM
sara, enthralling, flowing melody with rhythmic charm! is this for a contest?? best wishes!:) huggs,nette
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