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Saturn

S Saturn whirls, twirls, in centrifugal dance A Around in cosmic ecstasy T Twirling, turning she’ll entrance. U Undreamt fantasies woven in her R Rings, play out in 4/4 cosmic rhythm in N Notes of click-clanking, tinkly, icy drums. 5-28-2021 Planet Poetry Contest Matt Caliri

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Date: 11/25/2021 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Saturn" Acrostic write. Have a blessed day.......................
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Date: 11/21/2021 12:13:00 PM
what a lovely acrostic ML, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2021 11:15:00 PM
A great acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/20/2021 8:59:00 PM
Congrats on a 10th place finish in my Planets poem from forever ago. I love the "4/4 cosmic rhythm" line. Fantastic work!
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Date: 7/1/2021 10:18:00 PM
BRILLIANT Too Good
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Date: 6/28/2021 7:11:00 AM
You did make fun of Saturn in your contest. Made me laugh.
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Date: 6/27/2021 9:28:00 PM
Excellent acrostic. Captures Saturn imaginatively. Good luck in the competition. Be well. Brian
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