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Saturday Night

It’s another Saturday night
I’ll be dancing til the morning light
Surrounded by laughing friends
I hope this moment never ends

My body is pumping
My heart is thumping
I’m in my prime
I’m having the best time

Lights are flashing
Music is thundering
The dance floor is shaking
Feels like the Earth is quaking

Alcohol sedates my brain
Confidence is what I gain
I feel
God it’s great being ME!

I feel like Cinderella in my own story
I’m smiling, shining in all my glory
I see my Prince crossing the floor
He sees me too and makes a detour

Our bodies near
Our intentions are clear
Our lips touch
I want him so much

We start to dance
I’m in a trance
He’s holding me tight
Explode.I just might

Images distort
The love bug I’ve caught
Let this night go on forever
With my Prince and I together.

©copyright Juanita Torr

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:00:00 AM
    I love them old days were i would club on Saturday nights... I like your intentions here of wanting to find the prince we girls dream of..... a lovey and fun dear friend...pd

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 4:34:00 PM
    you really set that dancing mood with this one!! It made me think of two different songs: You make me feel like Dancing and another song called Another Saturday night (and I ain't got no money)!! haha have you heard it before? very dynamic writing.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Music can certainly focus our passions. I hope your tale has a happy ending.