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Saturation Point - Hawaii

Saturation Point Dirt under my nails A withered feeling I did not notice the sun Until I succumbed to a weakness In by back and knees My shoulders sagged My eyelids were Like those lead fishing lures I found in a corner of my scrape yard I’d like to call my garden old The simplification of watching the Process of spring Is a spring Daffodils sprout from my table They are yellow, from Safeway, butter-cup gold Morning glory bells and daisy clusters Could not be crushed In their proliferation on the chicken-farm road The old lady sat triangular A heart’s distance to my house She thanked me for a gift of an orchid and gladiola They were on silken paper, but not fake She thanked me for the real thing and some Potato salad my children had delivered I smiled- There was no dirt under her nails.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/21/2015 4:48:00 PM
Your story flows with a pleasant beat and the words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness of familiarity because it is so easy to relate to the heart of your story. Emile.
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