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Satin Gown Divorce

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Satin gown glow
Brides face shows Love; betrayal now
Satin gown glow
Sheen and luxury colors show
Exit graceful stage left I bow
In satin gown I can't frown, wow!
Satin gown glow!!

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Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/1/2011 3:18:00 PM

* “Thank You * For The Wonderful Cup of Mornings Joe, Yet * I Am More of A Jane Kind of Girl *.* And, I Can Envision Your Lovely Beauty In Sweet Satin * My Dear Beautiful Precious Doris * Tis Is As Dream This Beauty * Yesss, Nothing to Frown About * How Could Something Sooo Beautiful Ever Be * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 4:21:00 PM

I have pink laces on my sneakers Doris for breast cancer awaeness here too luv.. I think I look like a toy of some kind..haha... unless Barbie wears pink laces ..oh..happy weekend ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2011 11:10:00 AM

Dear Doris,, so the happiness begins when the divorce takes place,, can be,,, please let me know,, a bit about this one,, it is rather interesting,,, thank you,..p.d.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/2/2011 5:54:00 PM

Great job here Doris. I don't thinnk anything can compare to a bride's happiness on her wedding day until she gets her first real shock of the end of the fairy tale. I think we all go into marriage expecting to live happily ever after and it's a shock when the reality of life in general hits us and we have to grow up. That's for grooms as well as brides. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2011 8:39:00 PM

the glow shines and quickly fades in this stunning piece of satin gown divorce Doris.. why do luv and betrayal go hand in hand sometimes? oh if we knew before we said "I do".. brilliantly penned with great emotion..luv.. nice photo of u three at luncheon..luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/26/2011 4:55:00 PM

Sounds like a "girl thing" (ha ha) enjoyed reading this Doris..i shall not venture more.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/24/2011 8:16:00 PM

I always say, "exit as gracefully as you can" not always possible but you show it can be done. Nice one Doris.

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/19/2011 9:18:00 PM

Satin gown without a frown...Thats the way to do it! Nice!

Daver Austin

Date: 9/19/2011 6:11:00 PM

Not a bad way to go out - I guess? Love, daver

Terrell Martin

Date: 9/16/2011 3:30:00 PM

I hope I can die as happy as this divorce! Sweet piece ma'am and thanks for stopping by "my place" earlier. Your comments on "You asked me what I'm doing" and A Letter to Elizabeth" were refreshing and uplifting. Thanks very much and I hope to read more of your lovely work in the coming days. Peace luv, Terry