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Satin and Old Lace

Bent fingers trace embroidered leaves on satin and long lacy sleeves. Blush roses, twenty-six she counts-- A French word she can't now pronounce. She blows dust from old envelopes tied with blue ribbons and her hopes. The letters penned by her true mate. Over his name, she... hesitates. A trunk in attic soon became her refuge from days all the same. Photos dwelling midst her daydreams, and keepsakes of sweet seventeen. She thought he'd walk up Dusty Lane; he might appear, along with rain and wash away her endless tears; bring summer nights and happy years. A wedding date that came and passed; memories cut like broken glass. A heartache like the roaring wind, returning nightly without end. She lived alone among the ghosts of dances, laughter, champagne toasts. Altho eccentric, she was bright; looked forward to impending night. Aunt Agnes passed at ninety-three; still wore her ring for all to see. Memories left for wind to tend; they have beginnings but no end.

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Date: 3/5/2022 11:12:00 AM
Ann, I really enjoyed reading this melancholy tribute to your great Aunt... the song Eleanor Rigby came to mind, with all the lonely people whose stories are never told. So many beautiful lines in this: "tied with blue ribbons and her hopes", and "alone among the ghosts of dances, laughter, champagne toasts", are splendid, but I think my favorite is "Memories left for wind to tend; they have beginnings but no end." Lovely poetry, going in my faves ~ John
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/18/2022 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for your lovely comments. I hadn't remembered Eleanor Rigby till you mentioned it--one of their many great songs. Aunt Agnes actually lived to 106, but it didn't fit :) Thank you for faving it! I think she would thank you, too. :)
Date: 8/20/2021 11:00:00 AM
This is such a lovely tribute to your aunt, that you really "saw" her and understood her pain. It is so true of us also when we grow older. Although one cannot live in the past, it is still very meaningful, and we treasure those memories.
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Ann Peck
Date: 8/21/2021 5:03:00 PM
Thank you for reading this, Barbara. I've been dwelling in the past myself since the present became so difficult to understand. The past I remember was easier. Take care.
Date: 6/16/2021 11:24:00 AM
Blessing on your Aunt Agnes and yourself - Ken
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/16/2021 12:45:00 PM
Thanks, Ken.
Date: 6/16/2021 9:52:00 AM
Ann, this is superb. Sad. Real. Superb. So many human stories never told. Great cadence. I read it a few times. Your words pulled me in. Cheers - Gary.
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/16/2021 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Gary. Yes, a sad story, but I think many women didn't marry another if scorned or her lover died in war.
Date: 6/7/2021 9:02:00 AM
A powerful, emotive write, Ann. Your story tugs the heart. So well written!
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/11/2021 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Yes, a very sad, true story.
Date: 6/3/2021 11:14:00 AM
The sadness of all those times lost, very heart breaking~
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/11/2021 8:17:00 AM
Yes. I think it may have been the thing a woman did in early nineteen hundreds, as there seemed to be so many elderly maidens.
Date: 6/1/2021 11:24:00 AM
A lovely bittersweet treat of a write!
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/2/2021 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Date: 5/29/2021 9:37:00 AM
what a touching story of love that lasted through life carrying the burden of pain
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/1/2021 10:00:00 AM
Yes, he was killed in war and she never married.
Date: 5/28/2021 12:26:00 PM
This one touched my heart. Beautifully written Ann.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/28/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Anne! So good to hear from you! I'm so glad you felt the emotion. She was my great aunt.
Date: 5/26/2021 10:59:00 AM
This is such a sad and lonely piece depicting one who waited her whole life for here true love to return to her and make her his wife. Perhaps something happened and he was killed in action or something. And she never loved another. Beautifully written with great emotion. God Bless, JB
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/28/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Judy. She was my great aunt and her true love was killed in WW1, and, you're right. She never married. So sad. '
Date: 5/25/2021 12:48:00 PM
Historians seldom capture the social pressures that influenced how people lived their lives; an outline is not history! You did a great job here! Aloha! Rico
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/25/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thanks, Rico! Oh, most history books are a joke. And you're right, a brief outline is all they offer. Aloha!
Date: 5/25/2021 7:57:00 AM
oh, what memories you brought into the light, sweet Anne......wish i could talk to her...seemed like i could..your ideas and thoughts are amazing.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/25/2021 8:06:00 AM
Thanks. Suzanne, for your lovely thoughts. Visiting her was like turning pages back to 1918.
Date: 5/25/2021 12:47:00 AM
I could just imagine the scene of the old dear reflecting and hoping, but sadly it didnt turn out how she had dreamt it to be. Well written Ann Tom
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/25/2021 8:04:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. She was actually my Great Aunt Agnes, living in a stately old house, with old memories, even still driving her old Ford.

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