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Satellite

before time was time throughout all eternity you were always there sending out signals waiting, patiently waiting for me to recieve… Inspired by the song 'Ripple' by the Greatful Dead 'It's a hand-me-down The thoughts are broken Perhaps they're better left unsung I don't know, don't really care Let their be songs to fill the air'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2013 4:29:00 PM
Very good write! I really liked it- Heater
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:43:00 PM
Tim, this has got a lyrical feel to it, or maybe its just me? How are you doing? Hope the week has been kind to you. ;) smiles and hugs me
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:12:00 AM
Nice one..I enjoy reading your poems Tim and its been quite a while..: )Quite a few yrs actually.Very creative.
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:15:00 AM
Your right songs help deliver a certain poetic life tag maybe thats way we love music so much great poem poet.
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Date: 7/24/2013 3:47:00 PM
this is wonderful, Tim, and to answer your question< i was in Hayward. A horrible place to raise kids. We got out just in time i think!! (it was 1990 when we left)
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:06:00 AM
Fantastic! Tremendous inspiration too. There's a song from Rise Against called "Satellite". It's a great song.
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Date: 7/24/2013 7:01:00 AM
great words! Laura :)
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