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Sated Love

The look bestowed upon me makes me yearn A smile that speaks of favored pleasures near You blow upon the embers make them burn Shut out the world; enclose me in your sphere I feel within your arms the burning urge To claim and make me yours as captive one Your raw desire now with mine does merge Your searing hands defy the blazing sun Scorched in the flame of your inferno’s heat I moan your name as soul and body melt Hands clutch and twist the damp and crumpled sheet As hungry lovers we the rapture felt A cooling breeze from open window seeps As sated love once more in dreamland sleeps Eileen Manassian Ghali Song of Solomong 2: 5 - 7 Strengthen me with raisins, refresh me with apples, for I am faint with love. 6 His left arm is under my head, and his right arm embraces me. 7 Daughters of Jerusalem, I charge you by the gazelles and by the does of the field: Do not arouse or awaken love until it so desires.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/19/2013 6:20:00 PM
Eileen; I just loved this one. You are an awesome writer. God bless you always... Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2013 7:32:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, my dear Lucilla. Very sweet of you to say that.....I'm touched.
Date: 10/18/2013 10:13:00 PM
Incredible! You have written a masterful poem here. Great rhyme, great meter, and the choice of words and placement is brilliant. I love the whole poem. The first stanza is breathtaking. I'm in awe.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2013 7:33:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Jon. You are always a source of encouragement. I will respond to your mail just now....
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 10/18/2013 10:15:00 PM
Sent you more soup mail
Date: 10/18/2013 6:29:00 PM
I think your turning into quite a sonneteer my little Desert Orchid, rhythmn perfect, rhymn excellent, content whoa lol Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2013 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, Mr Seal. Your post is greatly appreciated. I'm glad that I have been able to brush up on my sonnet writing. Craig was great help. I was asked to write one to mark the jubilee hear of our church's establishment in Lebanon. I wrote a sonnet entitled, Faithful through the Years....It was well received. :)
Date: 10/18/2013 5:18:00 PM
Solomon would be jelous of this one!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2013 7:46:00 AM
What a sweet compliment, Richard....
Date: 10/18/2013 2:23:00 PM
I need a drink. Another set of powerful lines filled with desire & clarity. Rarely is there something more fierce than an unblinded desire.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2013 7:49:00 AM
Rarely is there something more fierce than an unblinded desire!!! What a powerful, strong, forceful line...AWESOME!!!!

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