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Satan's Spawn

Spawn of Satan Behold the demonized beasts, Satan's spawn! Chained to the gates of Hell for all Eternity Eyes of fiery coals and drooling mouths agape. They roar in anger to sate their hunger with YOU! October 30, 2015 Contest in 5 lines or less.

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2015 1:28:00 PM

Excellent dark and chilly interpretation, Lin!! A most worthy winner...Congratulations!! // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Paul.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2015 9:35:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/9/2015 1:52:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Constance La France

Date: 11/8/2015 11:59:00 AM

Lin congratulations on your placement with this awesome write. ..

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 12:03:00 PM

Loads of thanks, BW.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2015 10:18:00 AM

I really like how you did yours. So descriptive in those few lines. Congrats, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea. I'm glad we were limited to a few lines because my imagination was beginning to run away with me, and I didn't like where it was going. lol

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/8/2015 9:21:00 AM

Hi Lin: Very fearsome description! Congrats on number 3!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 9:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Ralph.

Samiha Zubair

Date: 11/8/2015 4:27:00 AM

Greatly enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 7:10:00 AM

He, Samiha.. I appreciate the read and the congrats.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/7/2015 11:11:00 PM

Lin, this really good. Great imagery. Congrats on you win it was well deserved:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 7:10:00 AM

Many thanks, Alexis. It definitely took me out of my realm, and that was kinda scary. lol

Michael Tor

Date: 11/7/2015 10:32:00 PM

One of my favorites Lin. Congratulations.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 7:09:00 AM

Hiya, Michael...I'm so glad you like the creepy side of me. lol

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/7/2015 8:01:00 PM

This winning poem is awesome. Congratulations! Janice

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 7:08:00 AM

Thank you...so much, Janice.

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 6:19:00 PM

Lin, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 7:08:00 AM

I will do, and thanks.

Julia Ward

Date: 10/31/2015 5:06:00 AM

A drama indeed! Best wishes, Julia

Lin Lane
Date: 10/31/2015 5:09:00 AM

Thank you. If you've seen the picture SKAT used, you'd know how evil this had to be.