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Sappy Poem 7

The rain clashes against the ground in a daze. She has this tired look in her eyes. She’s troubled, terrified for what happens next. You tell her to trust you, but she can’t. You know she can’t. She’s confused, lost in her thoughts dreaming about the day she’ll be found. Look past the smile, and into her eyes. Can you see it? Is it there? There’s all of her despair. There’s an actress inside every girl, look a little closer, you’ll see her there. She smiles, but it’s fake. Can you tell that it’s fake? She wants you to notice, she wants you to care. Thunder crashes violently in the sky, she gives you one last look with a tear in her eye. Now do you see it? Now is it there? She walks away, but you’ll never care. She’s screaming, but you’ll never notice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/14/2016 12:12:00 AM
I meant to say, SAppy like your title... not sapphire... my typo...
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:11:00 AM
I like all your sapphire poems especially 1-6, Kayli , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 8/12/2016 8:47:00 PM
Very Sappy, Kayli Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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