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Santa's Elves

Santa’s Elves At twelve the "ELVES” helped SANTA CLAUS. They packed wrapped TOYS in their new SLED. Thick snow draped WINTER FAIRY LAND. The view from Heaven was quite grand. New snowmen popped up everywhere. But only Frosty came to life. Loud laughter filled home’s warmth inside. FROSTY THE SNOW MAN danced outside. Young children caroled JINGLE BELLS. Elves and parents TRIMMING the tree, Heard SLEIGH BELLS ringing in the dark. The stars shown bright that CHRISTMAS Eve. Big brothers watched for young one’s sleep. They rode their sled onto the porch. Oh, what fun two elf brothers had? They wrapped more gifts to bring inside. They helped eat treats with Santa Claus. Their growing up was not so hard. Becoming an elf brings sweet perks! 12/23/2016

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Date: 12/28/2016 7:08:00 PM
Wonderful Christmas story, Dane, I enjoyed reading congratulations on your win : )Don’t forget to eat your black-eyed peas New Year’s Day will attract a financial windfall. Wise tail from my hubby's family Hugs Eve
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 7:58:00 PM
Oh, yes. I bought plenty of black eyed peas today. Big Smiles. It was a tradition that my grandmother taught to me. I think of her every New Year even though she crossed the Vail in 2003. (I still miss her, too.) Happy New Years to you and your family, too. Hugs back attcha! Dane Ann
Date: 12/28/2016 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win love...
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and leaving your kind words.
Date: 12/28/2016 8:14:00 AM
Wonderful write and win...Congratulations!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and leaving your kind words.
Date: 12/28/2016 7:17:00 AM
- Christmas poems, always a pleasure to read :) - Congratulation on your win, Dane Ann :) - Happy New Year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 7:30:00 AM
Thank you... and always fun to read and write. I really enjoyed this contest. I have more winners to read this afternoon. I only made it a little less than half way through the list, every minute smiling and remembering. It was a fun contest.
Date: 12/28/2016 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann!!! Lovely write!!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/28/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by again. It's nice to see your encouraging words. Smiles and Hugs, Dane Ann
Date: 12/23/2016 7:12:00 PM
what a sweet offering for the Christmas season, DAne Ann. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/24/2016 3:29:00 AM
Merry Christmas, too, Andrea. Thank you for your kind comment.

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