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Santa Sleeps

Santa snores Chin bobbing Teeth whistling Elves laughing At the sight Rudolf snorts Awakened By the noise In bad mood Contest sponsored by Charles Messina Charlieku 3-3-3 contest Penned 16/12/2018

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2019 5:07:00 PM

Whoa!! Santa was not in a good mood for Christmas this year? Oh! No!! Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2019 12:49:00 PM

fun one, Seren. Wishing you a blessed NEw Year and congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:52:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 7:23:00 PM

This one made me laugh out loud. A great job with this Charlieku, Seren. Congratulations on your placement and I wish you a very Happy New Year. Charlie

Jan Allison

Date: 12/16/2018 6:39:00 PM

what fun imagery Seren:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/16/2018 5:32:00 PM

I'm laughing at the snort

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/16/2018 4:46:00 PM

LOL. Cute! :)