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Santa Clause

On Cristmas Eve, comes Santa Clause, stuffing tons of cookies in his jaws. It's no wonder he's Jolly and fat; I would be too, if I ate like that.

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Jeremy Smith

Date: 5/10/2017 5:31:00 PM

Nice flow, good job again!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 10:54:00 PM

Arlene, Congratulations on your "Christmas Character Clerihew" :) LINDA

Eve Roper

Date: 12/20/2014 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Arlene, Blessings and Merry Christmas

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/20/2014 8:51:00 AM

I do and I am..! Congrats on a clever write and win. BG

Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2014 7:15:00 AM

This is so smooth flowing and witty, Arlene! Congratulations...a very merited win! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 12/20/2014 4:23:00 AM

so so clever many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/20/2014 4:18:00 AM

Very well composed write, congratulations on the win, Arlene

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/20/2014 3:28:00 AM

I am feeling pretty jolly myself right now Arlene. I got a kick out of your poem because I could identify with Santa. Congrats on your win! I am still smiling.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2014 1:02:00 AM

oh arlene, change it to Claus!! Other than that, this was PERFECT. one of my favorites in the contest. CUTE as can be. Congratulations.

Arlene Smith
Date: 12/20/2014 8:18:00 AM

Uhhh! I seem to always miss a little something in forms! Lol... Thank you so very much for the placement in your contest, dear Andrea... Hugs.. Arlene

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/17/2014 6:41:00 AM

I wonder why Santa doesn't share his cookies with the reindeer, but then if he did they would be too fat to fly!

Roy Jerden

Date: 12/13/2014 9:28:00 PM

Ah, yes, "The Santa Clause"... Well done! Good luck in the contest!