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Dec. 9, 2023       9.13 am

Santa Claus had grown countless years old But always strong and treasured by all like gold He’s the joy of children everywhere on Christmas Bringing toys and gifts for all, lad and lass. Although he’s so old, never went cranky Just a problem on hearing-loss and a shaking knee He could no longer hear his silver bell So he'd hung a thousand on his sledge-rails. He added some on every part of his reindeers With big dangling gold bells for their earrings He wanted everybody to hear his coming With those bells’ sounds, his ears picked least rings. From north pole to south, he kept saying go, go, go When about to stop, a loud command ho, ho, ho But his pets were deafened by the thousand bells They only stopped when badly in need of water in wells. This was the start of Santa’s new atypical tale When he stationed at south pole for pets’ garage sale His favorite Rudolf with fading red nose, so dear Was sold to a plump man from the east, a millionaire. Santa was able to buy a new pick-up truck His toys and gifts were reloaded in big boxes and sacks But he got problem driving on plains and snowy hills Santa enrolled for a week-driving lesson paying less bills. My grandparents keep on saying, If you haven’t yet received gifts Just wait patiently with great hope as if time won’t drift Santa Claus will be here soon from his driving school To give toys, gifts and lots of blessings, that’s so cool!

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Date: 12/25/2023 10:48:00 PM
Funny Santa Claus Poem - Old or New Contest Judged: 12/13/2023 6:49:00 AM Sponsored by: Joseph May Place 1 ( up to 3rd multi-w)
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Date: 12/14/2023 1:07:00 PM
you did really well with this rhymed story telling, my friend. Congrats to you.
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/25/2023 10:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Andrea. May God bless you always and your writings. Merry Christmas! Hugs
Date: 12/14/2023 3:27:00 AM
Lol, St Nick in driving school, but the presents are on the way, Very nicely penned Len, Congrats on your win
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/25/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Joseph. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Wishing you all the best this Christmas! Hugs
Date: 12/13/2023 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Len!
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/25/2023 10:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Kim. Sorry fot the late reply coz I got sick then followed by a final exam at school. God bless you always. Merry Christmas! Hugs
Date: 12/13/2023 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your fun "Santa Claus" write/story. Hugs... Have a fun day............
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/25/2023 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and I'm glad you enjoyed it my dear poet friend. God bless you always and your writings. Merry Christmas! Hugs

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