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Sandstorm On the Beach

The wind sweeps quickly along the quiet beach peaceful and calm Before the rain comes crashing Lightening and thunder follow the water capturing it's glow As I watch from my hole in the wall cabin Feeling it shift from one end to the other watching the magic of the storm in amazement As dry sand granules dodge the storm And flutter wildly in the wind escaping their fate till the next big sandstorm Karen croft 9-12-13 Build your own sand!

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Date: 9/22/2013 8:12:00 PM
Karen, this is a nice winning poem..Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:07:00 PM
Nice approach...:-) ....congratulations
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:20:00 AM
Hello Karen hope you had that smile for your daughter again . Lovely poem ...Seren
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:23:00 AM
I can almost see it unfolding through your words...well done ...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:17:00 AM
I love the line of the sand dodging the storm !! What a lovely winning poem ! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:57:00 AM
Your superb poem gives me a vicarious experience of the sandstorm my dear friend Karen. Thank you so much for sharing and my big hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:33:00 AM
the vision you impart is one of great beauty Karen congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/20/2013 7:55:00 AM
You made me feel like I was there. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/13/2013 1:24:00 AM
- A well written poem for the contest - good luck Karen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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