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Sandstorm Embracement

Elements : Earth and Air Beneath a sky I lay in vast emptiness a desolate Earth of silica, still in silence. a barren desert burning in hot flames. quartz and granite in my fields of gold. My ocean of sand, with a mirage afar only thorns of hope in my parched soul. Suddenly you arrive, whirling and slinging A gale of storm, untamed and possesed willowy oak needles piercing my grains in your fervour so violent and fiendish inebriated and dessicated, yet I fall in love. thirst of my sand quenches in your Air full of slivers, in your tumultuous lust wrapped in your arms in my own dust we roll and toss together... we rise and fall together... In our Embracement you erode me and in my new dune, I bury your love. I nurture a new garden in our oasis rain My Sand and Your Storm ... When will we see each other again ?

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Date: 9/23/2023 8:28:00 PM
Earth and air as lovers, nicely done! You did a great job of adding the personification that I was looking for. Congrats!
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