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Sandpaper Dreaming

A little sandpaper smoothes the edges The final touch that makes the job complete You think of your angel yet to be born This crib represents your loving protection The final touch that makes the job complete Is the love that was poured out each moment The crib represents your loving protection You have been working and praying for days Is the love that was poured out each moment enough to keep your little baby safe? You have been working and praying for days Deep inside you trust God will answer Enough to keep your little baby safe Not to prevent her from experiencing pain Deep inside you trust God will answer A balanced life for your girl with no name Not to prevent her from experiencing pain Emotions good and bad will complete her A balanced life for your girl with no name You smile as you try to come up with one Emotions good and bad will complete her Your heart searches for a name that's strong You smile as you try to come up with one Sara floats gently across your mind Your heart searches for a name that's strong It needs to be pretty and inspire a poem Sara floats gently across your mind The very first gift she will ever receive It needs to be pretty and inspire a poem You think of your angel yet to be born The very first gift she will ever receive A little sandpaper helps smooth the edges Nette's "Build Your Own Sand Contest" I removed from the contest because I went over 20 lines.

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Date: 8/15/2014 7:49:00 AM
Oh that is so wonderful, my name is a mix of Cassie and Sarah, sarah is a strong name meaning princess. You poem was so lovely! I am glad I chose this one to read this morning it warms my motherly heart :) hugs sweetie.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2014 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, It was good to revisit this poem.
Date: 9/13/2013 10:02:00 AM
This poem is great... That number of lines stuff... stifles creativity... and lowers the emotional impact... But a contest is a contest... Loved this one....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/20/2013 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Carol, the good news is I ended up with two poems from Nette's idea.
Date: 9/11/2013 6:33:00 PM
another nice write Rick...shame it's over 20 lines though I think the other one is really good too :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/20/2013 5:17:00 PM
So glad you like them both.
Date: 9/10/2013 6:12:00 PM
Another good work from you Richard :) All the best..I wrote something ...:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2013 8:31:00 PM
Thanks Red, on my way to have a look.
Date: 9/10/2013 4:41:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, Richard. This is lovely
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Date: 9/10/2013 2:51:00 PM
thanks for entering, richard... :) huggs
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