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Sandpaper

By: Jeremy Aguire Contest: Build Your Own Sand Contest Date: 09/17/2013 I didn't measure up. Within your plans, I wasn't enough. My life was sloughed. Back to the pencil and I'm rebuffed. Now I've been scuffed. These are imperfect stains, They're complicated and they're erased. You've scraped against my grain. I was replaced just to imitate, a chosen face. You had to finish me, covered in sawdust of apathy. You've made a standard theme, a clone life built up by makeshift beams, your twisted dreams. I am the centerpiece, of your imperfect philosophies. Humiliation cease! Bring back my sanded identity, my tendencies. Please pry me off and toss. I'm not that man that you thought I was. Your sense of right is lost, and there's other beams to look across, another cause.

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Date: 9/22/2013 8:10:00 PM
awesome win....Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:16:00 PM
Well done....congratulations
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:26:00 AM
congrats Jeremy ...Seren
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:35:00 AM
great use of metaphor and emotions in this piece...congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:31:00 AM
There is so much emotion and honesty in this poem.........I would have placed it much higher. Well done, Jeremy!
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:19:00 AM
An awesome write this is my dear friend Jeremy which I enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for your great win! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
much of your soul implanted here Jeremy congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/17/2013 11:47:00 AM
well written , and stunning ~ 7 ~
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