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Sandcastle Faith

grain structures of sands... rain vehement and strong winds disintegration For SKAT’s Contest

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Paul James

Date: 12/15/2010 1:02:00 AM

A metaphor for all human efforts, maybe... A poem that is to the point and sharp. Thanks, by the way, for your response to my blog, it was much appreciated. I am learning more about the site every day through the helpfulness of yourself and others.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 12/11/2010 5:18:00 PM

That last line has power. Your work is unique and it is always good and never pretentious or boring. Thanks, John as always. Gerard.

David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 4:19:00 AM

A deserving win, my friend. Thanks for being the faithful evangelist you are.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 12:17:00 PM

Excellent, John! Sand doesn't provide much of a lasting foundation. Congratulations on your win with this haiku; I don't know how I missed it earlier. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/7/2010 12:14:00 PM

Great haiku John. Congratulations on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win John in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:57:00 PM

COOL one like a parable! congratulations, john. LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 6:41:00 PM

Congrats John on your win-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:34:00 PM

Congrats Moses my friend..way to go.. winning a top ten spot in Irma's contest for this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2010 11:48:00 AM

many good wishes to go with the placement John, and also thank you for your good words to me.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/6/2010 9:45:00 AM

Hi. Congrats for the win with the lovely and well written piece above. Thanks for your kind comment. Eamon

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/6/2010 9:03:00 AM

Hello John, Congratulations on "Skats" contest win! Well done As Always, Shar

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:31:00 AM

Nice one John....congrats on your win...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:16:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, john

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:34:00 PM

John~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT