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Sandcastle

Seagull swim in sky Ocean drowns tan sandcastle Beached black whale dying

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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/23/2024 3:36:00 PM
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So much imagery and emotions in this haiku, Karen.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/23/2024 6:14:00 PM
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I appreciate you reading Jerry
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2024 11:46:00 AM
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A whole lot of imagery in a few lines. Nature is cruel.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/23/2024 12:12:00 PM
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Yes but funny how it balances out
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/23/2024 5:52:00 AM
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lovely Haiku about beach scenery...I would be sad seeing a beached whale die.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/23/2024 12:11:00 PM
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Hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 3:28:00 AM
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Sad to hear of this happening. Sometimes they can be saved and sometimes they can't. Sara K
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/23/2024 5:22:00 AM
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True. Thanks for reading Sara!

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