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A sojourn took me to a beautiful sandy shore Dreams abounding that I could be Like any other child I had read about To pile up all the sand in my view And build my multitude of dreams That I believed would turn into reality With every passing day In an open box I placed a wooden board That I had carried along I built a cottage and not a castle For I knew I was no queen From the jasmine sellers I bought a garland To demarcate my pristine garden Two ice cream sticks were the sentinels Guarding the gate A few shells, some of which were half broken Made a passage to the open door Neither the heat spell nor the burning skin Deterred me from completing my dream With the dimming hues of the sunlight I carefully shut my world in the sandbox We travelled back home with my eyes focussed Only on the box lying unstirred in my lap On reaching home I placed it on my table Tears streamed down non-stop To see the wilted jasmine flowers Crushed under the debris of my home With swollen eyes I lay in bed Sniffling every now and then And it was then that I awakened To the strong smell of jasmines Reviving in me to re-build my dreams Tomorrow I would build a more stable home....... October 14, 2016 For Anthony Slausen

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Date: 10/19/2016 2:14:00 PM
I love your powerful feeling of hope, Balveen, that you built into your little sandbox of dreams. Beautifully expressed, and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/23/2016 7:51:00 PM
Many thanks Sandra for your appreciation! Balveen
Date: 10/19/2016 10:28:00 AM
may all your dreams cone true Balveen... congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/19/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks for your kind wishes, Luloo! Balveen
Date: 10/19/2016 9:48:00 AM
this is endearing, balveen... shine with your victory and congrats!,,huggs
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Date: 10/19/2016 12:29:00 PM
I take pride in your compliments, Nette! Love, Balveen
Date: 10/19/2016 5:49:00 AM
What a home and what memories. As Jack said there is always hope and I wish you lots of your dreams come true, Kai
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/19/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and appreciation, Kai! Balveen
Date: 10/19/2016 5:36:00 AM
A great tribute to hope Thanks and congrats JE
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/19/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thanks for your kind appreciation, Jack!
Date: 10/18/2016 7:39:00 PM
A lovely piece deserving of the win. Congrats.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/19/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thanks Richard! It's always so warm to hear from you! Balveen

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