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In single file with rifles in their hands belaboured breath under an airless sun, slip sliding swiftly, softly shifting sand beneath their boots the sparkling granules run. When they set out, those twenty-two brave men all battle hardened, making this Platoon were slowly picked off, time and time again by next door's dog, or buried with a spoon. And just when safety seemed to be in sight, gazing skyward, the Captain cursed their luck, they backed off from it's shadow, wreathed in fright, their doom sealed by a bright pink rubber duck. A child's imagination knows no bounds for in their world, enjoyment's always found. For contest 'Sandbox', sponsor Anthony Slausen

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Date: 10/14/2016 3:07:00 AM
I smiled.. This vivid image will stick in my mind for quite a while :) Good luck in the contest!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/14/2016 11:00:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/12/2016 9:31:00 PM
I had to read this a couple times! Great write, very creative Viv!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/14/2016 10:59:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/12/2016 12:12:00 PM
I enjoyed your creative imagination, Viv! I can relate to the content of this sonnet which takes me back many years! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/12/2016 7:40:00 PM
Thanks, Paul, if I had a pound for every toy soldier I lost in our yard, I'd be rather well off. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/11/2016 6:32:00 PM
Love this one of boys playing soldiers. Good luck in the competition, Viv: Always,bSuZ
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/12/2016 7:40:00 PM
Thanks, Suzy D, hope you're well, Viv x
Date: 10/9/2016 10:56:00 PM
Very creative, Viv - your healthy imagination shows through and shines ... CayCay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/12/2016 7:40:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay, SM, Viv x

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