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Sandbox

She carried it with her, wherever she went. It never left her sight. She grew with it, from the time she lived with her parents as a child, in their beloved tropical island. Her father gave it to her, as a Christmas gift for her eighth birthday. He wanted her to carry some memories of him and her mother wherever she went. At first, it was light. She didn't want to carry any sand with her. Sand couldn't carry memories; only texture of fineness. Now, the sandbox has some weight of memories; she has photos of her parents, grandparents, their house, the ocean, sandcastles..... Her sandbox slowly wears out, but time is unable to fade the memories...

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Date: 10/19/2016 2:03:00 PM
Very heartfelt, Teddy. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra, for your warm applause!!! *^_^*
Date: 10/19/2016 12:13:00 PM
The sandbox weighs heavier with memories-it couldn't be truer, Teddy! Congrats on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:30:00 PM
Yes, indeed!! Thank you so much Balveen, for passing by to applaud my work!! ;-)
Date: 10/19/2016 10:27:00 AM
so true, time is unable to fade the memories, love the last line Teddy... congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:28:00 PM
Hi Laura. Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Date: 10/19/2016 9:39:00 AM
so heartfelt, teddy... cheers to you for stunning award..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette!! *^_^* I really appreciate it!! ;-)
Date: 10/19/2016 5:40:00 AM
I really like that take on the sandbox. Sand and memories, the memories of sand and the sand of memories. Congratulations, Kai
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:24:00 PM
I really appreciate how you took time to review my work.... Thank you so much Kai, for applauding my work!! :-)
Date: 10/19/2016 4:46:00 AM
Memories Great write Thanks for sharing JE
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:21:00 PM
Welcome, Jack. Thank you for enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Date: 10/18/2016 7:33:00 PM
A perfect nostalgic piece, congrats.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard, for your kind applause!! :-)
Date: 10/14/2016 7:24:00 AM
So meaninful, Teddy- Time is unable to fade away the memories! Balveen
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2016 4:18:00 PM
Precisely!!! ;-) Thank you Balveen, for enjoying my piece!! :-)
Date: 10/5/2016 11:34:00 PM
Teddy, this is Poetry! So heartfelt and beautiful!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/6/2016 5:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Arthur, for your compliment and continuous support!! ;-)

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