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Sand Castle

As my country was bombed and I lifted away into the skies I looked back and promised myself I would not forget this house of sand in these times of rain © Samir Georges 2009

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Samir. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Date: 5/31/2010 2:53:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 5/3/2010 6:46:00 PM

Congratulations Samir on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/3/2010 9:14:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2010 3:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Samir. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/10/2010 7:04:00 PM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup, Samir! Peace, Audrey

John Freeman

Date: 2/10/2010 11:21:00 AM

Samir, congratulations on feature being revealed this week. Sincerely, Moses

Daver Austin

Date: 2/9/2010 12:42:00 PM

This flies real fine. I like the double image. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

James Fraser

Date: 2/8/2010 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/8/2010 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Samir. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

Date: 2/8/2010 5:53:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

Date: 1/2/2010 4:52:00 PM

I really like the last line. Much said in just three lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/2/2010 2:18:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Samir. Please continue to write and share with us at PoetrySoup the whole year through. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/1/2010 6:18:00 PM

Very touching the last line says alot! Welcome to the soup! Light & Love

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/1/2010 11:40:00 AM

short and beautiful piece here... sounds like one of those classics you read from time to time. Enjoyed this read and have a great day and happy new year as well. :):)