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Sand Between My Toes

Sand between my toes. Along the beach I walk hand in hand with you. The world is a beautiful place. Along the beach I walk watching the setting sun. The world is a beautiful place. Happiness is this beach. Watching the setting sun hand and hand with you, happiness is this beach and sand between my toes

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James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2011 10:29:00 AM

Walking on the beach with the sand between ones toes is a lovely feeling Francine. Lovely summery pantoum :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/10/2011 5:15:00 PM

I thought if I went to the beach I might be inspired by the sand between my toes..love this...( didnt happen lol ) BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2011 3:29:00 PM

Come to visit me and you'll feel that sand between your toes, Francine. Really enjoyed reading this, especially the line "Happiness is this beach." Delightful. This poem clearly reflects the Soup's own definition of the form. Hope our form questions get answered. Love, Carolyn

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/10/2011 11:11:00 AM

A fabulous write Francine!! I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest~ Caryl

Ingibo Benson

Date: 7/10/2011 10:54:00 AM

Wow! I love this, you know, from the title...Sand between my toes, it's so picturesque, and I felt like I was tickled. Good luck in the contest, keep writing.

Julie Heckman

Date: 7/10/2011 10:45:00 AM

Looks like you off to a good start