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'The Georgia coast is geographically the westernmost point of any Atlantic coast region, and part of the area known as the South Atlantic Bight, the coastline that curves from Cape Hatteras, NC to Cape Canaveral, FL.  St. Simons and Jekyll Islands are at the inward-most point of the South Atlantic Bight and thus experience the most severe tidal ranges of 6 to 9 feet. The Atlantic Ocean's tidal range, miles offshore, is just 2 to 3 feet.' —National Park Service | Fort Pulaski (nps.gov/fopu/learn/nature/hydrology.htm)


St Simons Island, Georgia USA
East Beach, 12/4/2011

Sand Bar "Your focus determines your reality." —Qui-Gon Jinn Witnessing an amazing low-tide phenomenon, as if a walkway to a parallel world has suddenly appeared, extending one-half mile from East Beach out to sea People are slowly gathering, walking, stopping, stooping, staring in silence, speaking softly— I'm as eager as Simon Peter to join them, yet somewhat afraid of walking where there has been only seawater minutes before— Chattering dolphins beckoning in the distance instill confidence So I join them, stepping from the beach onto the other-worldly terrain, first 42 steps confirming we are not alone! Surrounded by a menagerie of sand crabs, clams, beach flea amphipods, sea roach isopods, ghost, hermit, and fiddler crabs, even cannonball jellyfish— shades of the Mos Eisley Cantina on Tatooine in miniature But beware of semidiurnal tidal cycles! Twice a day at high tide the sea, like an unstable vortex of a Chappa'ai, consumes the phenomenon, even the beach itself, to the edge of the dune "The mystery of life isn't a problem to solve, but a reality to experience." —Frank Herbert "So long and thanks for all the fish!" —Exiting dolphins' farewell message, translated by Douglas Adams

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Date: 7/4/2023 12:15:00 PM
Wonderfully portrayed - I was on a American cruise lines from Jacksonville through the Golden Isles to Charleston a few years ago - a special journey
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/4/2023 2:41:00 PM
Hi, Craig. I can imagine it was a special journey. Thanks for sharing and for taking time to leave such an encouraging thought.
Date: 5/31/2023 12:11:00 PM
An awesome beach sights poem and wow to how you could spot and name all those creatures.! Creatively presented i enjoyed this fab muse lots. Kudos!!  >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/31/2023 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, S.zaynab, for your encouraging comment and visit. I'm headed your way now. :)
Date: 5/21/2023 2:34:00 AM
Sounds an intetesting place to visit and your poem captures the drama of this unique tidal flow. Water, tides, beach, the variety of inhabitants....all come together. Home base for me.
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Date: 5/21/2023 2:29:00 PM
A spot-on summation, Paul. This was my first time experiencing such an event on vacation back in 2011. I appreciate your taking time to read and comment.

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