Sanctum

Through your heart’s inner sanctum, I, savor your deep inhale bringing you closer to God. Will you be my breath? © Drake J. Eszes *Linda-Marie 'The Sweetheart of P.S.' contest: "SPICY": 4th place. YAY!*

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/3/2013 5:36:00 PM

Amazing poem!....Hey, cool, I also have a poem titled, "Sanctum". Please, read it sometime.

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/3/2013 5:40:00 PM

Neat! :) I'll check that out. Thanks so much, Kelly!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2013 12:38:00 AM

Can't seem to find one I have not seen. but I don't think I have quite seen all your poems, have I? Anyway, I still think this is one of your best!!

Poet Tacito
Date: 7/30/2013 6:20:00 AM

=D Aww! Thank you, Andrea!! You may or may not have. Either way, I appreciate you taking the time to look at my other work.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/16/2013 8:53:00 AM

When the emotion comes from the inner of the heart..It definitely reaches its peak of passion and love..To exhale is the following move..Well done Drake..

Poet Tacito
Date: 7/16/2013 9:07:00 AM

Thank you so much, Charmaine! Yes, you couldn't be more right about that. =D

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/18/2013 11:16:00 AM

This is very nice,,,,And it won ;} I thank you for reading my Massacre,,, wrote it as I was reading snippets of stories. Your're right, it does go along with LOTR ;}

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/18/2013 1:18:00 PM

It did. :) WOO HOO! You're quite welcome and I'm very happy you stopped by here. LOTR, YES! :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/22/2013 12:21:00 AM

I don't know much about dodoitsu, but the content was nice. Congrats on getting fourth place... it's really encouraging to get marked high in the contests and it's a nice way to test the poets creativity.

Poet Tacito
Date: 5/22/2013 12:24:00 AM

I agree. I believe this was my 1st try on Dodoitsu. It was a good change of pace. Thanks so much!

Glenn Sentes

Date: 2/20/2012 6:20:00 PM

Stunning write here, pal. Congratulations btw on your triumph in Linda Marie's contest.

Poet Tacito
Date: 2/20/2012 8:31:00 PM

Thank you much, Glenn! =)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 1:28:00 AM

Congrats Drake on featured poem this week on PS... a wonderful write to share with luv my friend...hope all is well with u...

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/9/2011 7:55:00 AM

Hi Linda-Marie! Thank you kindly! :) Things are continuing to come together nicely.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2011 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Drake. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/9/2011 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Carol! :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/26/2011 8:32:00 AM

You can when I exhale. Lovely verse to think upon.

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/26/2011 8:35:00 AM

Nice! Thank you. :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/1/2011 8:04:00 AM

Hey Karen! Well, I do thank you for stopping by and reading this. =)

Karen Croft

Date: 3/1/2011 7:54:00 AM

interesting poem!!! karen croft

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/15/2011 7:25:00 AM

Awesome of you to say Robert, you will very soon. =)

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/9/2011 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. I want to see some more fine writings from you very soon.

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/25/2011 7:36:00 PM

That's very sweet of you to say. Just spoken from the heart with this piece. Thank you, Catie. =)

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/25/2011 5:32:00 AM

Good morning Hitendra! That's very kind of you to say. Thank you for that! Nice to meet you! =)

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 3:54:00 AM

Congrats Drake on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/24/2011 5:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Carol! =)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations Drake, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/22/2011 9:21:00 PM

@ Andrea, yeah I think it was a good closer to it all. An, exhale, if you will. Thank you so much. @ Dr. Ram, why thank you sir!!! Your poem was damn awesome! Congrats on your win as well! @ Robert, many thanks. I do appreciate that. =)

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2011 7:49:00 PM

Great entry. Congratulations on winning.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/22/2011 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Drake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 1:50:00 PM

I just love that last line, It's what makes this special. Congratulations, Drake.Luv, Andrea

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/22/2011 11:19:00 AM

@ John, yes, exactly. The core of our essence. Thank you sir! @ Linda, that's really awesome. I truly enjoyed writing this for your contest. @ KC, much appreciated. =) @ James, awesome of you to say. Thank you kindly!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/22/2011 6:52:00 AM

congrats! Drake!

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 4:16:00 AM

Hi Drake - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC