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Sanctuary

Placed Second in : Sanctuary, Soft, Stir, Surreal Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France "Remember, the entrance door to the sanctuary is inside you.” Rumi Sanctuary In the depth of my inner self Lies a small secret sanctuary Carpeted with a greenish lawn, Bordered with lilacs and roses, Sprinkled with saffron marigolds And berthed with leafy mango trees; It is a secret sanctuary Where colourful birds of my dream Filled with joy, hop from branch to branch And scan the blue sky as a team, Singing sizzling songs in a trance To vie with the whispering winds. I retire to the sanctuary To sow the seeds of mindfulness, Water the shoots and rising buds That will soon give birth to flowers To embellish the sanctuary And perfuse it with their perfume. I retire to the sanctuary To meet with zeal my longing muse, To beseech her inspiring light That I may carve some divine hymns And offer them at the Lord`s shrine As a humble token of mine. I retire to the sanctuary To retrieve hymns aligned on shelves, Brush out the tangled spiders` webs Endow them with gems of beauty And breathe freshened air unto them That they may soar in time and space.

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Date: 3/8/2024 9:19:00 AM
Krish, you have penned a wonderful poem for my contest, congratulations on your win, blessings, Constance
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/8/2024 11:24:00 AM
Thanks a lot poetess for appreciating my write and for my placement in the poetry contest, which you have so kindly put up. Your positive comments have lifted my spirits and given me grounds to steer ahead. Wish you pleasant weekend.
Date: 3/7/2024 8:07:00 PM
You have indeed carved a divine hymn ! Really enjoyed reading it. "It is a secret sanctuary Where colourful birds of my dream Filled with joy, hop from branch to branch And scan the blue sky as a team, Singing sizzling songs in a trance To vie with the whispering winds." Your sanctuary is invested with all possible beauty one can think of. What a lovely place it is to retreat from the noise and confusion of life. Congratulations dear Krishnanand.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/7/2024 11:40:00 PM
Thanks a lot Valsa for visiting my page and for your very positive comments, which uplift my spirits and make my day. Wish you a blissful day and delightful reading. Krishnanand
Date: 3/2/2024 4:49:00 PM
It is advantageous to establish a solid foundation to cultivate a vibrant garden of blossoming flowers, an inspiring muse, and boundless creativity. Additionally, the utilization of a recurring opening line in each stanza is particularly appealing to me. Best wishes for the contest and thanks for your uplifting comment on my page
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/3/2024 5:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot master Sotto for visiting my page and for your uplifting comments which raise my spirit to soar as birds of my dream. Wish you a shining spring Sunday.
Date: 3/2/2024 4:31:00 AM
Lovely poem. I especially like the carpet of greenish lawn in your inner sanctuary. It's good to have some ground, and then you populate the space with flowers, a muse and creativity. I also like the repeating first line of each stanza suggesting that this is a practice of habit, not an occasional visit. J :)
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/2/2024 6:46:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear friend for visiting my page and for your very positive comments, which touch the very depth of my heart. Wish you a wonderful week end.

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