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Sample of My Love

I miss you more everyday my thoughts of you wont go away you stay in my head and remain in my heart i can feel you right beside me eventhough were far apart my lips still tingle from the kiss you gave me last your nothing like the boyfriends that i have had in the past your the best guy ive ever known you make me feel loved even when im alone you treat me so perfict and i know you truely care you make my heart fly with every kiss that we share i just melt in your eyes everytime you look at me and you hold me in your arms so strong but gentely youve had a impact on my life and your face is engraved on my heart ill always love you baby wether were together or apart. -Spencer Coggsdale dedicated to Brandon Castillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2011 3:48:00 PM
Welcome to this site Spencer. You have expressed your feelings with a great deal of descriptiveness, and your rhyming is not bad either. Even though your work is full of misspelled words and grammatical errors, this was a good read.
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