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Sammy

everyone said he was too small for a good watch dog.... why did he leave such a big hole in our hearts?
.................................... 3/24/15 For Andrea's Contest: Tanka 3 Return To Top Ten

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Date: 4/2/2015 2:57:00 PM
Our pets become our love!! Congrats...Sara
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Date: 3/30/2015 11:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely tanks, Carrie! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/30/2015 9:03:00 PM
Back with congrats :)
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:34:00 AM
So sorry to know. Very nice tanka.
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:38:00 AM
Oh, Heartbreaking, Congratulations on your win a 7 Blessings eve
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Date: 3/28/2015 11:44:00 PM
a hearty tribute to Sammy, Carrie. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:46:00 PM
Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:22:00 PM
Love this, Carrie..."too small"..."big hole"... wonderful sentiments and juxtaposition. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:21:00 PM
simply splendid...big congrats Carrie
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:21:00 PM
Till the end he was as giving as while he was alive.He gave you this win even as you wrote this tribute for him. What a fine example of love between your family and man's best friend. Congratulations, Carrie!
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Date: 3/28/2015 11:54:00 AM
Oh, this so nice! heart-wrenching and very very telling.
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Date: 3/28/2015 7:39:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with this sadly beautiful poem, a perfect 7, why indeed do these little creatures have such a hold on our hearts . . .
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Date: 3/28/2015 5:47:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Carrie :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:31:00 AM
Carrie, this is adorably sweet and he perfect tanka for the that marvelous twist you gave it! simple one that tugs at the heart strings. Congrats.
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Date: 3/25/2015 3:04:00 AM
A beautiful yet sad tanka good luck in the contest Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:40:00 PM
Their paws always seem to find away around our hearts...nice tanka :)
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:01:00 PM
small in stature but mighty in spirit and bark!! They become part of the family and we grieve when they are gone! 7
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