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Same, But Different Views

The same person, a different view. Your mind wonders You wonder how you arrived at such a place So free, limitless, untouchable You breathe in the free pure air Absorb the innocent views, too pure to criticise You are your greatest friend Your mind wonders The snarl at this cruel world Unfair, hateful and disrespectful The smell of anger fill your lungs Sights you see are to be censored Trust no one but yourself Paradise, the smile you wear catches Others see your view and are embraced You truly have blessed your self You hold wealth in the palm of your hands You want for nothing You have everything that your heart desires Paradise, a place that is only dreamed of. Why embrace when others don’t care you say Church is the only place that can bless you You can not see wealth You will never have enough Your heart will desire everything you have not. You are of great stature A simple person of simple needs Simple by way of perception Nothing is a challenge Tasks are presented to you You take them as positive lessons You struggle with only yourself A simple desire to love to hate To you, nothing is free A walk in the park presents its challenge Nothing is your fault Everyone else is to blame

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Date: 8/7/2010 8:04:00 PM
Dear Gareth, Great POEM SOUP MAIL CALL YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:57:00 PM
Dear Gareth, Great Format, two entities in one Superbly Done I Bow to YOUR POETIC Genious Welcome back YOUR Liege Always...HG
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