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Salvation Seeps In the Mist

Salvation seeps in the mist And as light fades awe sings in temporal sonnets while goldenrod flits the fields and lavender scents joyful whispers for here neath this shadowy creature, Point Percee revels, wonder dances on cobblestones and voices are lifted beyond horizons as this warrior of scalloped wing and fire brand culls the night skies sweeping enchantment in place of fear, taken from the last war Salvation seeps in the mist where lost sons had fallen and once again risen within the flames of life, breaths of cast dreams where heroes fly and all is well With torches raised high, embers of elation flicker on soft winds illuminating cheers and celebrations in the name of the knight and his fearless collaborator 5/1/17 Written for the Collaborated Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper A link to Eve’s poem we were to collaborate with https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_dragon_of_haute_savoie_894917

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Date: 5/30/2017 8:43:00 AM
Congrats Chris, for your 2nd placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/30/2017 11:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Teddy, I am thrilled you enjoyed this.
Date: 5/29/2017 5:10:00 PM
Lovely images! Congrats, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 5:14:00 PM
Thanks so very much Kim. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 5/29/2017 4:37:00 PM
Very well done, Chris, I am so glad you took a chance in writing a wonderful piece for the contest. Congratulations on your win ~*
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Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 4:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much Eve. Your poem was so inspiring to me that I found this to be a true honor to write for your contest. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this. I am humble to have placed so high amongst all of those other talented writers.
Date: 5/2/2017 12:04:00 PM
An original tapestry of poetry, Chris. Very evocative and expressive. Beautiful use of language. Still at the top of your game, I see. Stellar poetry. Love it w/a 7! Many blessings of love and joy.
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie. Sorry for the late reply, I must have missed this comment my friend.
Date: 5/2/2017 7:29:00 AM
I read a few entries my friend, but this one is outstanding and my personal favourite. It's sooooooo good! 7 too ofc.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 10:07:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Eve's poem was very inspiring to me.
Date: 5/1/2017 4:44:00 PM
I WOULD FAV THIS POEM, IF NEVER I FAV'ÉD ANOTHER MY FRIEND!! Truly an exceptional piece! A7
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much Robert for your kind and encouraging thoughts on my poem. I appreciate you being so nice to me.
Date: 5/1/2017 1:23:00 PM
Hi Chris. Allow me to say may the torch remain raised and high. This was expressive. I will leave it at that and let your moment and scene speak. Good luck with the contest. This entry was another side. Well done entirely.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thanks so very much Lisa for always leaving such wonderful comments for me. I am happy you liked this one. It was fun to use Eve's poem as inspiration.
Date: 5/1/2017 12:49:00 PM
Hi Chris, You've penned a good collaboration piece for Eve's contest. I have a feeling that you will be in the winner's circle. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one

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