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Salvation of Air

Intensity rise the power of a deep breath pierces me inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/16/2010 9:40:00 AM
the makings of a fine haiku! juggle a bit setting line 1 action lines 2 & 3...a slight turnabout in the 3rd line..which you have! title is always line 1. No capitalization of punctuation needed. Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2009 12:57:00 PM
Great Haiku Kelsi>James
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