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salted love

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salted love

wounded emotion
standing on 
sands of time
gazing into
a distant horizon
in an ocean aroma
salted emotions
begin rising

as the moon winks
casting her silver
reflections upon water
shadows call inside
deep churning feelings
staring in 
a lonely space
touching deep within

dancing each wave
unfurling emotions
rippling feelings
crashing reality
upon rocks
if only i could walk
as the ocean
love 

kissing your 
salted feet
i would say to you
dreams they sometimes
can come true
to believe 
a reason
is believing 
in true love

wishing in 
the stars
in a trail 
of thought
i sip
salted water
flowing from 
emotions brew

if i were to have
only one wish
in this world 
a soul searches
my love
it would
be you

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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Wow! How beautiful...longing felt in every line. Another gem

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 11:51:00 AM
    Liam---You really captured scarred, wounded love in this piece....excellent!!!