Salmon Run

The journey upstream, A chance to deliver life; Swimming to the death.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2009 10:47:00 AM

Kool Haiku Abe, i work in the Aquaculture Industry>>James

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/24/2009 2:06:00 PM

Your images in this are crystal clear, Abe. This is a wonderful reflection on this cycle of life! A perfect Haiku! Thank you for your thoughtful comments! Love, Robin

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 7:41:00 PM

I left you some soup mail.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/14/2009 7:34:00 PM

Thanks for your commetns. You need some more poems to comment on. Love E

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/14/2009 7:29:00 PM

Nice work and Happy Valentine's Day..DN

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/14/2009 7:23:00 PM

What a great scene you painted here.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 7:20:00 PM

Swimming to the death, how sad..........Danielle

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/14/2009 7:05:00 PM

Nice poem describing a terrific but sad journey. Tyler

Brian Strand

Date: 2/14/2009 12:40:00 AM

Very true observation Abe.Rgds Brian

Christina Vasquez

Date: 2/13/2009 7:40:00 AM

nicely done abe

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/11/2009 7:03:00 AM

The eternal yin and yang nicely put. Keep writing and reading. Don't forget my Chair Tale contest. Light & Love Debbie

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/11/2009 4:09:00 AM

The upstream journey is nicely penned. Great title by the way. Love E.

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/10/2009 9:26:00 PM

Nice poem Abe, this word paiting is very clever.....The Chief

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/10/2009 8:34:00 PM

Nice, nice, nice. This one speaks of true sacrifice the salmon makes in order to survive...Raul

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/10/2009 8:19:00 PM

I like this one. You write very good Haiku's