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Sally Sue

Her name was Sally Sue. She always seemed so blue. One day she watched a comedy. She laughed until she died. She died in the living room.

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Juniper Spring

Date: 5/13/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thank you guys for all welcoming me to your community! I made this poem pretty quickly and will probably be conjuring up some more soon! I am glad I got so many reviews and responses, It makes me motivated to create more :)

Skat A

Date: 5/13/2016 9:36:00 AM

Poor Solly Sue, Juniper, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Juniper Spring
Date: 5/13/2016 10:12:00 AM

Thank You!

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/13/2016 8:20:00 AM

Jiuniper, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs

Juniper Spring
Date: 5/13/2016 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Manmath, It means alot :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 12:49:00 AM

Nice haiku, Juniper, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Juniper Spring
Date: 5/13/2016 10:20:00 AM

I love constructive criticism, it will help me get better and that's what I want. I'm pretty new to writing poetry. My college English class I took last year, 10th grade, had a lot to do with analyzing poetry and I enjoyed it more than any English class I ever took in high school. Really seeing the meaning behind poems and how clever a poet can be me makes me want to try to create my own. Thank you for welcoming me to the community.