Salesman

A grinning salesman at the door, She slammed it in his face and swore. For Susan's Overreaction

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Overreactions and Drama Queens" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2011 10:10:00 PM

This was short but it was VERY deserving of a win. Congrats in the contest, my friend.

John Freeman

Date: 11/29/2011 10:51:00 AM

A cool unique, Jack. Smile. Congarts on a worthy win. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2011 9:54:00 AM

Salesmen who come to my door get no response at all. I can't even hear them knock and I'm thankful for that. Fun poem for Susan's contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 9:51:00 AM

haha..Jack.. a clever piece luv..good luck in the contest .. I think I would have reacted the same..oh...

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2011 9:29:00 PM

Ha ha, that will break the smiling of the salesman! Not to many of those before that smile travels upside down!! Wonderful write!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2011 6:55:00 PM

Great way to end the confrontation. A fun verse to read Jack.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2011 5:19:00 PM

hahaha, HOw I wish I could come up with such short and clever ways to do these kinds of difficult contests!!!