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Sakura

the one whose beauty I treasure the most Brittle and dark her love no one knows As if under a spell that does not go She makes an appearance every year Sometimes early or later This is the time I hold dear All who see her are halted in awe She is beautiful but not yet mine I don’t want her to ever leave I will love her until the end of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/17/2011 9:38:00 AM
massive!!! I will definitely melting if someone said this to me :)
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:06:00 PM
Wonderful flow, great imagery, a nice piece you have Juania! Welcome to PoetrySoup dear. Please keep your creative caps on, let your passionate pen paint purposeful pages with poetic pride. Enjoy the great company of poetry people here. Love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:40:00 PM
Gorgeous tree poem...is this tree a Japanese Maple or a contorted Willow? You write of a deep devotion to nature and many in your audience will also fall in love with this beautiful tree that casts spells with its beauty. Your first write is fab! Fellow Souper!
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:22:00 PM
Those blossoming Cherries are a beauty for sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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